I have read your update on Arthur and Guinevere: A Fairytale it's wonderfull and can't wait for your next update. :D Also I am just starting to read Finale Quenn Of Hearts. It's really really good. Love your stories. You are a amazing writer. :D
I love reading your fanfictions. :)
I will work on some more updates for some of my Merlin fanfictions too for you. :)
I updated my Bracelet fiction and was just going to let you know. But this update is not really exiting as the other ones but its still an update. I will try and make the next one more interesting. Agrivaine and Lancelots interrigations are soon.
Hey I updated the Queen of Heart's fic and my Burning Love bracelet fics. Just letting you know so you can check them out : )
PS Don't worry about that deal you have updated enough and I can wait : ) Plus I would have updated anyway : ) Enjoy my fictions will probably update them again sometime later today and the dark tower fiction also.
No backing out of the deal now, and I was thinking about updating again tonight anyway as I could not wait until tomorrow. :) You're fanfictions are awesome and I really enjoy reading them by the way. :)
Yeah I kind of agree with you there it does not make any sense and adds a whole new plotline on top of all thats going on. I.E Guinevere leaving Camelot, the marriage, Arthur still semi enchanted, the princesses guilt. Just stick with that stuff, thats what I really like about your fic is all that drama : )
Okay cool. It is gone, and I'm working on a replacement chapter. :) I'll leave you a message when it is up. :) I do stuff like that sometimes post up new chapters but then think it doesn't work with the story and then delete it. Sorry for being a pain. X_X
Sure and I have a little bit more but I wanted to update some of it first before the rest : ) Can't wait for your next update!!! Hopefully you do some more today?!?!?!! I would be glad to see or read it : )
Oooo mybe she will be attacked by bandits and he saves her, or he see's her walking and she starts running and he catches up to her and acually I wont explain my vision I ill let it be a suprise for myself : )
And yes I have updated. Unless you saw the part of her running from the room already.
LOL. I will read the rest a little later, my dad is like "CASSIDY COME EAT BREAKFAST NOW" so I have to go eat breakfast and then I will be back on to talk with you, update my story and review your amazing rest of your story : )
Ok so one suggestion for right after the part you have written is Arthur answers the door and Merlin unenchants him and he goes back to normal Yadayada but the next morning he is back to being enchanted again because it was Merlin's Magic not Guinevere's kiss that saved him and in order for Arthur to be himself he needs the real deal (true loves kiss)
Another thing could be that the princess finds Guinevere crying about it and Guinevere spills the beans saying she likes a man they are in love one day and then she explains the situation of him saying he does not love her anymore and how he treated her (exept the princess does not know the man is Arthur) and Arthur esedrops to Guinevere talking to the princess and feels bad but not knowing why.
Arthur is walking down the isle of the wedding and is beginning to think somthing is wrong and when he is about to but has no idea why?
Or when Merlin goes to unenchant Arthur he does and Arthur's memories come flooding back to him of the princess how he treated Guinevere (that horrible but well written night) and he tries to make it up to Guinevere and she forgives him after alot of begging : ) and the princess see's them happy together and respects his decision.
I also imagine (this is my own personal opinion) a really big gushy apology scene from Arthur to Guinevere because I think he should atleast see (Memories come flooding back) what he did to her and what he said to her and how heartbroken she looked to him without him even caring.
I hope these suggestions help. Use all of these suggestions or none of them whatever you want. And I wont feel bad if you dont use any of them because you already have somthing wonderful written already : ) and if you want help writting a gushy romantic apology scene I would be glad to help you : ) but its also your fanfic so no worries if you don't want too.
Oh and that made me think of somthing else. Arthur having nightmares about what he said to Guinevere and he has nightmares of her brokenhearted face and the tears and pain she has in her eyes before waking up and either semi remembering as a lover or he does not remember at all just the nightmare part.
And acually if you do choose one thing from my suggestions take the nightmare one (you don't have too but I think thats my favorite suggestion one I have thought of so far) Anyways hope this gies you insperation and I hope to see an update soon Good Luck with the writting : ) And you know where to find me if you have questions about my suggestions or want help : ) Good Luck.
Hey I just made another fic about Arthur and Guinevere (of course) and I was just letting you know. Its called the burning love bracelet. takes place in season 4 episode 9 and by the title you could figure out the rest : ) Hope you like it if you read and get the chance : )
I do really like it no I LOVE IT and its a good idea and I am a little obsessed with Arwen fictions speacially ones that appeal to me : ) Cant wait to read your updated part.
Will Arthur yell at Guinevere again, she kiss him and then he remembers? Or will she kiss him and just walk away from him while her remembers his memories of how he treated her??? I hope to find out soon : )